Week 6- The Introduction

 

 

 

Week 6 Objectives - The Introduction

 

Let’s suppose that the two women ,one is pretty and the other is ugly, are running to the beach in front of you. How do you feel? Who are you looking at now? It would be the same answer when we even suppose there are two men. As you automatically see one who is better in physical beauty, people naturally tend to like more beautiful or handsome people. Then did you know that they also get more advantages? If you say no, I think it is just a belief that you don't want to admit it. For a long time ago, it was certain that here are also many cases they gain a lot of benefits just because of their physical attractiveness.

1. Attention grabber -

 I attracted the audience by describing a funny situation make them choose their own choice. Then I pointed out their common psycholohy to make them curious about my essay.

2. Explains the topic -

 In the attention grabber I introduce the entire of my topic: common behaviors of human toward those who are better in physical beauty, the fact that they could get more advantages.

3. My thesis -

 It is clear, direct and an argument. I thought the argument "People who are more beautiful and handsome are more likely to have advantages." was too simple and a little not clear. I changed it to a better argument, People who are better in physical beauty have more advantages.