Week 8- The Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?

    
People who are better in physical beauty have more advantages.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?





I am using expert essays and the interviews and many visual materials. 
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?

My arguments have many images that I cannot post on my essay, so I think that is problem with my confirmation. I think I should find more logic reasons which don't needs pictures. I need not only the polls from various people but also clear statistics ot studies to support my opinion efficiently.

My Confirmation

Firstly, the people who are more beautiful or handsome are advantageous in a first impression which is really important for social relationships.

 

The recent study, Heide, D'Angelo, &Schumaker, 2012, when people introduce themselves with their visual image which seems negative or introvert in facebook

 

psychological effect which is the hallo effect. _Research1

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Secondly, people judge everything with the physical beauty following the social cultures.  Even though you might not notice this consciously, still subconscious mind will notice the similarity and will judge the person by only appearance. Also the media makes this pattern, too. This is the biggest reason why do lots of people judge others by their outer appearance and physical beauty brings a lot of advantages._Reseach 2/4
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Lastly, better physical beauty gives shows better characteristics. More and more people started to get a lot of plastic surgeries to become beautiful. It doesn't show only the fact that many people spend their money on plastic surgery but also a lot of people want to become more beautiful than before. Their most reasons were they had been discriminated by their appearance and wanted to take advantages similar to those who are beautiful. _Research 3/5