2014년 9월 22일 월요일

Week 7- The Narration




My persuasive argument thesis is

People who are better in physical beauty have more advantages. (Although there are many things that can surpass the physical beauty, I think it is the most powerful that can gain many advantages.)


1. What do people already know about my topic?
 
Everyone knows the boys always like the girs who is more beautiful and vice versa. Based on this fact, people who are reatively not better in physical beauty often feel humiliated and want to become more beautiful or handsome. They have an inkling that the people who are better in physical beauty get more advantages than themselves.

2What research has already been done about my topic?

While researching:)

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

If it would be right, everyone will have a plastic surgery. Also all the misunderstandings that people regard it as a inequality would be dissapperer and they could have the right perspective toward the peopel who are better in physical beauty.
My Narration
 
People who are relatively not better in physical beauty often feel humiliated and want to become more beautiful or handsome. They have an inkling that the people who are better in physical beauty get more advantages than themselves. If it would be really right, everyone would like to have a plastic surgery. Also all the misunderstandings that people regard it as a inequality would be disappear. Like this, it is really important problem that can bring the huge aftereffects. Then many would wonder why the physical beauty is so important for having a more advantageous lives than others.





 
 

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