Week 11- Self evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think I could get 2 point. My first draft has all factors of classical argument with understanding of the classical argument. (But, I will do better on second draft!!)

2) What did you do well?

I had a good work on researching the interesting reasons that can catch the reader's interest.

3) What could you have done better?

Arranging the opinions orderly and make them more expertive.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I think I use the introduction well because I use the funny situation that is enough to draw the people's attention.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think I didn't do well on conclusion. In conclusion I had to summarize with main points but I think I couldn't organize it well. 

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

For next draft, I will concentrate on accuracy and mindset of professionalism.
I will support more exact not too creative.